The narrative writing

Once upon a time there where champers from a school called Lakers they always go on camp in
\ 2 years time. This camp is a little different because they went to a forest called the nightmare
forest most of the kids were scared when they heard it’s called the nightmare forest. It is time to
go they hopped into the bus and off they went they had a one hour and ten minute drive once
they got there they jumped out of the bus and grabbed there pack bags and started walking and
off went the bus.

Once they go to there spot Sam said “wait we forgot something it was something we came with”
“what was it” replied Mr Johnson  “ it was our big bags ohhh on” said Bob. “Wait look over there
what is that it looks like the school bus” said Bob “ohhh yeah” said Tom “let's go take a look at
it” answered Mr Johnson. Once they go near the bus they were creep ed out when they looked
inside “guys it kind of looks like we have to camp in there because we forgot our tents in the
trunk of the bus” said Mr Johnson “ummmmm I don’t know about that I think I can just sleep
outside” said Rebecca “me to” said Sandy “and me “ said Sophia.

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“Okay i'm gonna go inside the bus with the other children see you’s in the morning”
said Mr Johnson. Later that night aaaaaaaaaaaaaa oooooooooooooooooooooo “what was that”
whispered Sandy “I don't know” whispered Sophia  “where is Rebecca” whispered sandy “I don’t
know replied Sophia. “Look over there is that Rebecca why is she crawling with her hands and
her leg’ “is that you Rebecca” said Sandy no answer “it does not look like its her because it is
not replying” said Sophia “ohhhhh no” said Rebecca “lets go to sleep” said Sandy “okay” said
Sophia”. The next morning “Rebecca, Sophia  and Sandy were gone missing oh no there gone”
said Mr Johnson”