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Wednesday, 20 September 2017

Going to star dome

dffgtWALT recount a personal experience


Planning my recount


Title:


Orientation (Introduction)
Who?
John
What?
ONE TREE HILL
When?
Last Thursday
Where?
stardome
What happened?

Tell it in the order it happened.
First of all
We went on the bus we just waited then we Arrived to stardome miss Buchanan went to check in for the class to go into stardome.  
Next
We walked into stardome we looked a round the stuff we saw lego stuff that was a car that you need to go in space so you don’t need to walk
After that
We came in the room that has a gold and blue telescope it was big and we watched the moon go around earth is a small plant.     
Later on
We went into the dome it was big and colourful it had the rainbow colours then we lied back on nice chairs look up at the dome it like a semicircle but it’s bigger  
In the end
We went on the bus we came back to school and we had lunch.
Reorientation (Summary)


Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences: First of all
We went on the bus we just waited then we Arrived to stardome miss Buchanan went to check in for the class to go into stardome.  


Next
We walked into stardome we looked a round the display models we saw a lego spaceship that was a car that you need to go in space so you don’t need to walk .


After that
We came in the room that has a gold and blue telescope it was big and we watched the moon go around earth is a small plant.     


Later on
We went into the dome it was big and colourful it had the rainbow colours then we lied back on nice chairs look up at the dome it like a semicircle but it’s bigger.


In the end

We went on the bus we came back to school and we had lunch.

Wednesday, 28 June 2017

matariki celebration


Orientation (Introduction)
Who?
room1
What?
music
When?
On friday
Where?
Senior block
What happened?

Tell it in the order it happened.
First of all we went to the hall for special  assembly kauri flats school came to our special assembly they came and talked about fish tank and flounder  . I was in the pounamu kapa haka group.
Next we went back to class to do the roll and get a sticker  so we know which class that we go to when I got my sticker it says rm1.
After that when I got there Hunter and Josh was there too then we got into buddies then it was morning tea.
Later on after morning tea we went back into room 1 when we got in mr Wiseman told us to go into the imac’s and go no to garageband to find a slow and sad song then it was lunch time all the Senior block had share lunch we had sausage sizzle and trifle thank’s to whaea Saf for making our trifle.
In the end at the end we watch our movie that we made.