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It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate. He couldn't find anything even the key. So Adam walked to the kitchen where his dad was cooking. Now it has been four days that it has been missing for. He kept trying and trying to find it. If you are wondering who he is trying to find? He is trying to find the instinct in the living room.
Hi Elizah, My Name is Riley , I go to pompallier-catholic-school I really like you're story you used lots of punchuation.
ReplyDeleteKa-pai keep up the great mana
Im in press because you have good ideas and you have used punctuation in your story Hi my name is Kobey
ReplyDeleteGreat story Elizah,
ReplyDeleteYou really built up the suspense - now I want to know what happened.
Did he ever find the key?
Come to Room 13 when we are back at school and tell me how the story ends.
Mrs Shirley.