Going to star dome

WALT recount a personal experience

Planning my recount

Orientation (Introduction)	Who?	John
	What?	ONE TREE HILL
	When?	Last Thursday
	Where?	stardome
What happened? Tell it in the order it happened.	First of all We went on the bus we just waited then we Arrived to stardome miss Buchanan went to check in for the class to go into stardome.
	Next We walked into stardome we looked a round the stuff we saw lego stuff that was a car that you need to go in space so you don’t need to walk
	After that We came in the room that has a gold and blue telescope it was big and we watched the moon go around earth is a small plant.
	Later on We went into the dome it was big and colourful it had the rainbow colours then we lied back on nice chairs look up at the dome it like a semicircle but it’s bigger
	In the end We went on the bus we came back to school and we had lunch.
Reorientation (Summary)

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences: First of all

We went on the bus we just waited then we Arrived to stardome miss Buchanan went to check in for the class to go into stardome.  

Next

We walked into stardome we looked a round the display models we saw a lego spaceship that was a car that you need to go in space so you don’t need to walk .

After that

We came in the room that has a gold and blue telescope it was big and we watched the moon go around earth is a small plant.     

Later on

We went into the dome it was big and colourful it had the rainbow colours then we lied back on nice chairs look up at the dome it like a semicircle but it’s bigger.

In the end

We went on the bus we came back to school and we had lunch.