Choose it writing

 Once upon a time there was a city. That city was a great city. People go there for holidays or on vacation. Until  it was flooded the water flooded  over the bridge then people stopped going to the city because it was too dangerous. Then people at the city started to leave and did not drive. They had to go on a  boat because they can’t use the bridge.

The water will keep on rising and keep on going higher and higher. The city was flooded for over six years then the water started to go down slowly for like about three or four years. After three or four years the water was back to normal. People think the water was back to normal but it wasn't. It dried out and there was no more water in the city.

 

When the people were trying to get out of the city three boats did not make it out. Three boats sunk on the way they crashed into each other started from the bridge. So two boats were driving next to each other  one was going straight at the bridge so it did a turn but then the driver turned into the other boat.

The young detective

Task Description: So this week room 1 was writing a narrative about (the young detective) we were told to finish off the story.

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It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate. He couldn't find anything even the key. So Adam walked to the kitchen where his dad was cooking. Now  it has been four days that it has been missing for. He kept trying and trying to find it. If you are wondering who he is trying to find? He is trying to find the instinct in the living room.

Treaty Of Waitangi.

     

Task Description: Doing this task was fun I understand the Treaty of waitangi.  I understand why it is important to other cultures like it's basically important to Maoris. To start of this task we start reading the book about it so we know what to put down on this task.

IN MY HOLIDAY

In my holiday I went with my family to the beach
from my dad’s side. Once we got there we started
to eat takeaways and KFC. Then we ran into the
water we had a race who can swim the fastest we
started from my oldest uncle to my youngest uncle.

I came 5th the first person got two piece of chicken.
2nd got two piece of chips and the last one that came
3rd gets one piece of chips.

 

Simple,compound,and camplex sentences

Sentences

All About Me

Hello my name is Elizah, I am 10 years old I live in G.I. I am a Tongan.

My favourite food is KFC and my favourite TV shows is family feud.
My favourite sport is rugby so my favourite player is Jason Taumalolo.
What I like to do at the weekends is going to the beach with my family.

I enjoy learning about Reading because I like to read with my mates and I like playing sports because I get to meet new people when if I play rugby I like to work in Team 4 area.

Thank you for visiting my blog and following my learning journey. Please feel free to leave a positive comment.  

kiwi kapers

I am an acrobat I will be using a cyr wheel. And a hand balancing because it looks cool when we look from the audience. But on wednesday we went to the  theatre to perform for some schools. When I looked from the front I felt nervous because there was heaps of kids. I was balancing on the stands.  I tried to not look at the audience because I felt nervous in case I failed. The music helped me focus. I completed my tricks and I felt happy. I was tired after when I did my tricks.

Guardians of the Galaxy animation - Writing and Voice Over.

what would i take to space

Writing a story with Sione K - Once upon a time.

When I grow up

Hello my name is Elizah. I am a year 5 and my teachers name is Mrs Buchanan. I am Tongan and I have 2 brothers and 2 sisters. I like youtube so much that I want to be a youtuber and be famous. My favourite sport is rugby. I want to be a youtuber and be famous when I grow up.

Hot air balloon story